雅思口语P2 Describe someone who is a good parent（文字版）

When I say that a good parent I would like to talk about is my mom. She is a perfect gentle and strong woman, who tries her best to combine work and family life. She has been a loving and caring person, and she is the one that helps me keep my feet to the ground, to get me grown. I mean I am trying to say it's like my father is my guide, but my mom is my landmark. She is more important.  Being a woman has never been easy, and even today, they are seen as being equal to men. My mom always told me that in order to be respected, a person has to work twice as more as other people, and this is what she has always done. She refuses to be taking care of by my father and she is quite independent. so she also brings some money and food to the table. More importantly, she has always been able to make me understand life matters without having to be harsh or anything. She is so kind and patient. All these ingredients are what make her a great talent. So that's it.