033 - Phil Gets Notes On A Script

In this special episode Phil Hudson, my co-host, get notes on a spec pilot he wrote. That's not all; he's also sharing his script prior to my notes and his re-write so you can see how those notes are received and applied. This is a good one, so pay close attention. Download Phil's Pilot: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Bsa67wp33I0mbmCBHx50e7TeQBmQJUvO?usp=sharing Michael's Online Screenwriting Course - https://michaeljamin.com/course Free Screenwriting Lesson - https://michaeljamin.com/free Join My Watchlist - https://michaeljamin.com/watchlist