122. Yale Writing Expert Analyzes Two Successful College Essays

EXCLUSIVE VIRTUAL EVENT — COLLEGE APPLICATION TRAINING CAMP: Join our exclusive session with Shannon, Yale PhD Candidate and essay expert, as she walks you through how to write a supplemental essay that stands out. She'll cover researching the "why," structuring your response, and conveying personality inside a tight word count. Spots are limited. Here's the link to register.  📅 July 30 | 8PM ET Want personalized help with your application strategy? Book a free 1:1 call with one of our Former Admissions Officers here: CLICK HERE. RISING SENIORS: This is your last shot to get everything in place for college apps. Our Application Counseling Program helps you stay on track, craft a standout application, and improve your chances of getting into a Top 10 school, by up to 7x: https://hubs.la/Q03BtBZ50 Join us as Shannon, who’s taught literature and writing at Yale and Ohio State, breaks down two standout personal statements from students accepted into top colleges and Ivy programs. We dive deep into each essay—one takes a traditional topic and makes it deeply personal, while the other uses a creative structure and bold voice. Shannon analyzes what makes them successful, how they reflect each student’s identity, and the key lessons you can apply to strengthen your own writing. This is a very detailed analysis—perfect for students, parents, or anyone looking to master the art of the personal statement. --- Register for our upcoming webinars. We also offer tons of free resources on our website/blog.  Questions, comments, or topic requests? Email [email protected]. To learn more about InGenius Prep, visit us at ingeniusprep.com.