288| Weak vs. Strong: Let's Re-Write Together
In this workshop episode, Nichole takes weak accomplishment statements and rewrites them live, so you can hear exactly how the transformation works. In this episode: A look back at turning tasks into achievements, cutting what doesn't belong, and connecting your work to company goals, and how today pulls them together Five weak-to-strong rewrites: social media accounts, helping with the budget, communicating with clients, meeting deadlines, and taking on extra responsibilities What's wrong with each weak version, from sounding like a job description to being vague or just an opinion about yourself Why consistency counts as a number, and why a shortened timeline is worth highlighting The formula behind every strong statement: action, specifics, result A tip to estimate and say so if you don't have exact numbers Today's task: pick two flat entries from your one-pager, rewrite them with the formula, read them out loud, and optionally use AI to sharpen the wording Download the 7 Days to Ask for a Raise Challenge to help you confidently ask for a raise here. Connect with Nichole on Instagram @nichole.harrop
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