Does that surprise you

Sometimes, I have to really sweat over my lyrics! This lyric was originally written with a heavy rock genre in mind, but the flow of the words simply did not help ....? I finally did an almost complete rewrite, and changed to this "strange genre", which I think finally gave me something to be proud of. I hope you will also find it to your liking. My apologies to any country fans if you think it is a step too far!