EP7｜WD1-2｜托福寫作論點訓練：反效果論點｜為什麼政策可能越做越糟？ EP7｜WD1-2｜Unintended Consequences Argument｜When Policies Backfire

在托福寫作中，反對一個政策，不需要情緒，也不需要批判價值觀。 真正高分的寫法，是——用「反效果」來推翻政策的有效性。 在這一集 5 分鐘的 Writing Mini Episode 中， 瀛瀛會帶你掌握一條非常穩定、考場可直接使用的論點路線： 👉 政策目標合理，但結果可能偏離原意，甚至造成更嚴重的問題。 你會學到： • 如何用「反效果論」建立反對立場 • 公平性 × 行為改變 × 政策效果 的邏輯串接 • 6 個高頻學術關鍵字（可直接套用） • 5 個 TOEFL 寫作模板句（可組成完整段落） • 一條可在 10 分鐘內快速產出的安全寫作結構 🦙 適用情境： 公共政策、政府干預、健康與社會議題 這一集不教你寫「漂亮句子」， 而是教你——寫出「穩、清楚、有邏輯」的段落。 Ig 連結：https://www.instagram.com/p/DX6LQmdkqva/?img_index=1 留言告訴我你對這一集的想法： https://open.firstory.me/user/cmmsw5g710s7e01y91e426tah/comments In TOEFL Academic Writing, disagreeing with a policy does not require emotional arguments or value judgments. A high-scoring approach is to challenge its effectiveness through unintended consequences. In this 5-minute Writing Mini Episode, Ying-Ying walks you through a safe and practical argument structure you can use directly in the exam: 👉 A policy may have a reasonable goal, but its outcomes can deviate and even create new problems. In this episode, you will learn: • How to build a disagreement using the unintended consequences argument • A clear logic flow: fairness → behavioral change → policy effectiveness • 6 essential academic keywords • 5 reusable TOEFL writing template sentences • A reliable structure you can execute within 10 minutes 🦙 Best for topics like: public policy, government intervention, health, and social issues Writing is not about sounding impressive— it’s about being clear, logical, and academic. Ig link : https://www.instagram.com/p/DX6LQmdkqva/?img_index=1 Leave a comment and tell me what you think of this episode: https://open.firstory.me/user/cmmsw5g710s7e01y91e426tah/comments Powered by Firstory Hosting