Peace Lord of the Red Planet - Chapter Two

Shep and Philip, out of the frying pan and into the fire, have been mysteriously snatched from the jaws of death in Virginia, and transported to a world at war.  The Red Planet... is it Heaven?  Are these people whose civilization is so advanced angels?  Or are they merely human?  Shep does what comes naturally, and catapults himself and his friend into the thick of an ages old war.  This chapter starts to get a bit more explicit, so be warned.  I don't recall putting any foul language at all into this story, but the subject matter is adult.  Have had one bit of feedback thus far, and am eager for more.  Let me know what you think!