Positive Action

Update: Vox improved... Getting close to what I want now. Added a manual drum beat played on keys each element sepoerately but I had to as couldnt get the logixc drummer to do what I needed.. Where's K2 at? :-) Update: Vox improved and bodhrán added played with xylophone mallets Update: Day time vox run 1 in. Removed drum track as wasn't happy with it and just jammed nongos. Might need a human drummer here Update: Added keys. 2 VSTs I hadn't used before. Rising Sun & Plectrum Pad built into Logic Update: Added bass, rhythm electric guitar & started looking at a drum track. I have it kow in the mix as I think good power will be found in drums somign in and out and leading the emphasis of change in the piece Peace and Love out to everyone... This guitar line is from my own unreleased song called Buried in Ice. It's 20 years old but because music is the most incredible tool for retaining a memory I recorded it from memory only. This song only exists on video and cassett tape so recall was easier haha. I used the guitar line impulsively earlier for the lyrics I just wrote and used the first verse of the 20 year old song as the last verse in this one as it fit's really well. It should go some lovely places this piece :-) Think Muse and Radiohead in a pot maybe Lyrics Sometimes it feels like I'm overly real Maybe show too much love and positive zeal The Sir Isaac comes to mind His third law solidifies that science feeling kind Every action has an equal and opposute reaction So in this light my love cancels negative faction We lose all control when we don't curate our world Inner silence means proof delivered daily mind pearl Positive action Cancel negative faction Positive hope Leaves nagative for dope Positive real Moulds morality zeal Positive projection Proof now and future meet perfection Sometimes it feels like it's not worth the effort Then I see my kids eyes 'Aint no way I'm leaving them this desert I can give them good mindset I can teach them all of me But I need all humans to live by the tree Every hurting feeling can see positive healing Every insult neutral in compliment dealing Einstein knew physics and emotion He knew our minds' self controlled locomotion Positive action Cancel negative faction Positive hope Leaves nagative for dope Positive real Moulds morality zeal Positive projection Proof now and future meet perfection Ahhhhhh ah ah ah A liquor fool fading A nice cool craving Heavy and hazy A quite amazing high Our minds are buried in ice How could that be right? Look, I've seen the cold times glisten I've know the warmth we're missing Oh make reality a positive projection of me