S48E5 – How to Identify Poor and Excessive Descriptions

There is a delicate balance to providing descriptions to the readers. Write too little and your characters are empty shapes on a blank stage. Too much and it slows the pace of the book. Of all the problems we talk about this month, this is one of the more difficult to identify. In this episode, we discuss how to spot when your descriptions need work. First aired November 16, 2023.