The Novel: Chapter 1

I started Wordshop 101 under the pretenses of documenting what it's like to write a novel. My explorations have branched out in to literary history, craft issues, and popular culture, but this week, I bring it all back home with the first excerpt from my novel. Though I've revised and polished it many times over, it largely stands unfinished in need of something that I cannot give it: an unbiased, critical eye. I'd love to know what you all think of what I've written, what you needs revision and what can stay. Email your thoughts to [email protected] and enjoy.