You've Got Five Pages, Fortune Favors the Dead by Stephen Spotswood, to Tell Me You're Good.

The first chapter can make or break a reader's engagement with a story. We as writers must craft brilliant opening pages in order to hook those picky readers, so let's study the stories of others to see how they do it! While Fortune Favors the Dead by Stephen Spotswood is not a new book, it is new to my library. It's the first of a "hard-boiled" detective series featuring a pair of women (one with multiple sclerosis) solving crimes in the 1940s. When I read that blurb about the detectives, I just had to give it a go, and I'm so glad I did. No need for bait-and-switch prologues here! We jump right into character Willowjean Parker describing the first time she meets detective Lillian Pentecost: "The first time I met Lillian Pentacost, I nearly caved her skull in with a piece of lead pipe." It's a wonderful opening line that brings the classic game/film Clue to mind, and it got me hooked to see how these two would really interact. Just as Pentecost's body language and dialogue share a lot about her, so do Parker's thoughts one what she sees and reacts to ("I took the wire out of her hand and had the job done in ten seconds flat. I'd picked harder locks blindfolded. Literally.") I'm already eager to see how the other two books in this series shape up, for if these opening pages are any indication, Pentacost and Parker are not a pair to pass up.  What will you make of these first five pages? Let's find out!