You've Got Five Pages, Killers of a Certain Age by Deanna Raybourn, to Tell Me You're Good.

The first chapter can make or break a reader's engagement with a story. We as writers must craft brilliant opening pages in order to hook those picky readers, so let's study the stories of others to see how they do it! Deanna Raybourn's Killers of a Certain Age certainly needs no prologue to hook readers! Instead, her opening chapter starts with the protagonists preparing for their first mission--not only as stewardesses, but as assassins, too. I mean, when the third and fourth sentences of the novel are "It's not murder," Helen corrects. "It's an assassination, and you can make an effort to look nice.", you as a reader know you're in for a fun time. The opening scene introduces us to a group of women new to this "life of lies" as they prepare for their first mission under their supervisors posing as airline pilots. The dialogue drags a smidge on the fourth page, but there's enough personality in the exchange that we as readers are okay with the slow preparation, as we are learning to differentiate the character traits of the team. Plus, a brief reflection by one of the women helps remind readers just how much is at stake: not just the mission, but the lives of everyone on the mission, too. The use of movie lines during the exchange also helps emphasize the timeframe we are dealing with, as this first chapter is, essentially, a flashback to the protagonists' first mission in 1979. The majority of the story is to take place in the present day when all these female assassins are older. For one who loved the movies Red, Harry Brown, Sea Wolves, and yes, Arsenic and Old Lace, I'm really excited to see what time does to these ladies--and what happens to those foolish enough to underestimate them. What will you make of these first five pages? Let's find out!