You've Got Five Pages, Storm Watch by C.J. Box, to Tell Me You're Good.

The first chapter can make or break a reader's engagement with a story. We as writers must craft brilliant opening pages in order to hook those picky readers, so let's study the stories of others to see how they do it! C.J. Box’s Joe Pickett is not a boring protagonist, nor do the opening pages of Storm Watch feel stale. This game warden clearly has principles when it comes to treating wildlife with dignity and respect, whether it’s putting an elk out of its misery or capturing a wolf before it kills another creature–cattle, or human. But it’s the first few lines that really impressed me with Box’s prose: Late March in the foothills of the Bighorn Mountains wasn’t yet spring by any means, but there were a growing number of days when spring could be dreamt of. For Wyoming game warden Joe Pickett, this wasn’t one of those days. This was a day that would both start and end with blood on the snow. Right off the bat, we get a sense of the narrator’s dry sense of humor. (As a Midwesterner, I can empathize with the sentiment, too.) That touch of humor comes right along with important information about our protagonist, where he is, what the environment is like, and what he has to deal with: bloodshed. Now what’s really cool is that the “blood on the snow” is NOT just an allusion to his work with wildlife; in fact, we as readers know from the dust jacket that there is a mysterious death to be solved in this hard wilderness. So Box’s turn of phrase here is particularly effective: it connects to the opening scene and the protagonist’s profession as well as foreshadows the rise in action to come. And what will you learn from these opening pages? Let's find out! Cheers!