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EPISODE · Jun 9, 2023 · 21 MIN

You've Got Five Pages, The Golden Spoon by Jessa Maxwell, to Tell Me You're Good.

from You've Got Five Pages...To Tell Me It's Good · host Jean Lee

The first chapter can make or break a reader's engagement with a story. We as writers must craft brilliant opening pages in order to hook those picky readers, so let's study the stories of others to see how they do it! So I was initially bummed when I saw The Golden Spoon by Jessa Maxwell had not one prologue, but TWO. I also glanced ahead and saw that frequent head-hopping is in a reader's future, for the story follows the many perspectives of baking contestants on a cooking show at a hoity-toity New England estate. So if you're not a fan of constantly changing POVs, this may not be the book for you. That said, the first prologue does a wonderful job of balancing a little backstory with current action. Since we are with Betsy, the estate's owner and creator of this baking competition, we are quickly learning her desperation to keep the show and estate afloat while begrudgingly taking on some "grunt work" of checking camera equipment on a dark and stormy night. Her thoughts allude to some previous debacle, of conflict with the cohost, of possible problems with the contestants--everything seems to be going wrong this season, and the dark'n'bloody discovery she makes in the camera tent--well, it's the icing on the cake, isn't it? The *second* prologue is a news release from *two weeks earlier.* So yes, we already have a flashback and we're not even in the proper novel yet. Still, I appreciate Maxwell's move to utilize a news release for providing quick breakdowns of the cast--that is, the baking contestants. It's an eclectic mix of people with their own voices and skills, all of which sound like they could potentially get applied in a murderous situation. As a writer, I can also see how such a breakdown could help with easy refreshes of a character's voice and perspective so that one doesn't mess up these character traits and languages. As Janet Evanovich highlights in her blurb, this book has strong Clue vibes, and I am ALWAYS up for a good game of Clue. :) What will you learn from these opening pages? Let's find out! Cheers!

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