Should I have Offered Help?

I listened to a Georgian folk song on You Tube which someone had sent me a link to. Very short, and almost no story - almost a mystery, really. I looked for a translation into English and found that it had been used by an English speaking, well known performer. I have not listened to his version yet. But having written my own version (such a beautiful melody) I will be and maybe add the link here to the original. I have left it as a mysterious encounter, with no explanation. But intend to explore several perspectives in at least two more versions. This is obviously from the man's point of view, another POV is that of the woman. And thirdly, a call and answer with both singing. |I think it sounds fun.