Revision Wizards

In this episode, V.E. Griffith and Miss Catherine M.H. explore the concept of author voice, defining it as the unique way a writer narrates a story, distinct from character dialogue. The hosts discuss when and where author voice is employed, particularly how it interacts with the story's inherent "pulse" or rhythm. They also touch upon the uniqueness of author voice while acknowledging the practice of mimicking other authors for practice or market trends. Practical aspects of editing author voice are covered, including word choice, sentence structure, and paragraphing, with one host emphasizing adapting their voice to genre. Finally, the discussion addresses when to remove or temper author voice to avoid interfering with character development and the importance of differentiating character voices from the author's own.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2650

This episode, hosted by Lon Varnadore and VE Griffith, dedicates episode 62 to the topic of editing timelines in writing. They define timelines, emphasizing its importance, especially when managing multiple points of view. The hosts discuss their individual methods for tracking timelines, with one preferring to discover issues during revision and the other utilizing software like Aeon Timeline for better organization. They explore how complex timelines, such as those with unique calendar systems, can pose significant challenges for writers, ultimately recommending the use of tools to identify and rectify inconsistencies and ensure internal consistency within the story.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2648

This podcast episode, "Editing White Rooms," features a discussion between co-hosts Miss Catherine MH and VE Griffith, as they explore the concept of "white rooms" in writing—scenes lacking descriptive setting. They each share their personal struggles with incorporating setting details, with Miss Katherine MH tending to over-describe and VE Griffith often under-describing. The hosts offer practical advice for writers and editors on how to identify and address white rooms, emphasizing the importance of sensory details and character interaction with the environment to create a more immersive experience for the reader. They also touch upon the balance between providing sufficient detail and maintaining narrative pace, and the differing challenges of describing indoor versus outdoor settings.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2646

In this episode, V.E. Griffith, Miss Catherine M.H., and Lon Varnadore discuss the process of editing worldbuilding in creative writing. They explore what worldbuilding entails, from creating the physical environment to the cultural nuances of a story. Each host shares their personal approach to editing worldbuilding, revealing they have different methods which depend on their individual writing style and the specific story or genre. Key areas discussed include using sensory details to enrich the world, incorporating cultural elements through character interactions and dialogue, and the importance of maintaining a consistent "story bible" to track changes made during the editing process. Ultimately, they conclude there is no single correct way to edit worldbuilding, but that practice and understanding one's own tendencies are crucial.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2643

This episode features co-hosts VE Griffith and Miss Catherine MH discussing their differing approaches to editing fictional characters. They explain that characters are essential to a story, acting as the vehicle through which readers experience the narrative. VE, a plotter, emphasizes the importance of planning aspects like physical traits, emotional makeup, dialogue, attitudes, and growth arcs, often reviewing these in separate passes. Catherine, a pantser, describes her process as more intuitive, where characters "visit" her and their physical appearance and speech patterns are naturally revealed, with her editing focusing on ensuring consistency in descriptions and dialogue, as well as the characters' interactions with others and their underlying goals. Both hosts acknowledge the value of differing methods and the reader's connection to well-developed characters.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2641

In this episode of the Revision Wizards podcast, co-hosts Miss Catherine M.H. and VE Griffith discuss the journey of writing and the significant improvements that come with editing and practice. Catherine shares an excerpt from her first attempt at a novel in her youth, highlighting its flaws and contrasting it with a more recent first draft to illustrate her progress. They both reflect on their early writing experiences, including initial feedback, the impact of learning about self-editing, and the value of continued effort. The hosts emphasize that writing is a skill that develops over time, akin to learning a musical instrument or a sport, and encourage listeners to persevere through the challenges of drafting and revising. They also touch upon the importance of learning from feedback and the ongoing process of refining one's authorial voice.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2638

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In the Revision Wizards podcast episode E057, co-hosts VE Griffith and Catherine MH discuss AI editing software specifically beneficial for writers. They focus on Grammarly, Autocrit, and ProWritingAid, sharing their personal experiences and highlighting the strengths and weaknesses of each tool. The conversation covers features, pricing models (including free and paid versions), and integration capabilities with other writing software like Scrivener. Ultimately, they conclude that these AI tools are valuable for catching errors and improving writing style before involving human editors, but are not a replacement for the nuanced feedback a person can provide, especially in fiction.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2636

The Revision Wizards podcast episode 56 explores note-taking and storage methods for writers. The three hosts share their individual approaches to notetaking, which include using Scrivener, OneNote, handwritten notes, and other applications. They discuss when and how they use notes in their writing and editing processes, as well as their preferences for keeping or discarding notes once they have served their purpose. The hosts also debate the merits of different methods, from digital organization to physical hoarding, and discuss the challenges of remaining organized.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2633

This podcast introduces Lon Varnadore as the new Sage Apprentice and co-host. Lon, an indie-published science fiction and fantasy author with over ten books, shares his writing journey and process, revealing himself as a "pantser" who enjoys the discovery of rewriting. He discusses his editing techniques and struggles with anxiety despite his publishing success. The hosts explore Lon's writing habits, such as working on multiple projects, and preferences, like rewriting over editing. They banter about their differing views on writing processes and their lack of podcasting plans. Finally, Lon shares his social media handles, inviting listeners to connect.Support us on Patreon at https://patreon.com/revisionwizardsThe Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comTranscript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2631

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This podcast episode of "Revision Wizards" explores the numerous resources available at libraries for writers and editors. Beyond books, libraries offer writing and editing guides, research materials, and quiet spaces for work. They often host writing groups, workshops, and seminars, providing community and learning opportunities. Libraries also may have recording studios and access to museum passes. The hosts emphasize the many unexpected benefits libraries offer, encouraging listeners to explore their local library's resources. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2628

TWO YEARS OF EPISODES! YAY! The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2616

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This episode offers grammar and punctuation advice for writers. The hosts discuss common errors, including the Oxford comma, comma splices, and sentence fragments, providing explanations and solutions. They also address the use of passive voice and invented words, emphasizing the importance of clear, concise writing. Furthermore, they suggest using writing aids to improve grammar and punctuation and recommend maintaining consistency in invented vocabulary. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2613

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In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss when to stop editing a manuscript. The hosts offer several criteria, including reaching a point of arguing with oneself over minor details, completing a set number of editing passes focusing on different aspects (plot, character, grammar, etc.), and achieving a feeling of finality. They also address when to cease working with clients, emphasizing the importance of pre-agreed scope of work, timely payment, and a positive working relationship. Ultimately, the hosts stress the need for clear communication and defined expectations in the editorial process. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2464

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss editing dreams, flashbacks, and letters. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2462

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In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss different points of view and the challenges in editing them. Books Mentioned A Series of Unfortunate Events by Lemony Snicket (series) Wheel of Time by Robert Jordan and Brandon Sanderson (series) Kinsey Milhone Mysteries by Sue Grafton (series) The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis (series) The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2459

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss the differences to keep in mind when editing series versus stand-alone novels. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2455

Meanderings of Not Much

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith answer a listener question and talk about managing ideas as they arise, separate from the actual writing output. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2452

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss time management strategies for writing and editing. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2448

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In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss strategies for editing book blurbs. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2445

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In this episode, V.E. Griffith talks with Miss Catherine M.H. about being on the receiving end of an edit. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2440

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In this episode, we discuss etiquette and expectations for getting beta readers and participating in critique groups. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2431

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In this episode, we discuss techniques to deal with over-writing. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2428

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss how to fix writing too little! Book Mentioned The Emotion Thesaurus (2ed) by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2426

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss the do's and don'ts of getting your edits back from your editor. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2409

In this episode, V.E. Griffith and Miss Catherine M.H. discuss the ins and outs of creating a style guide for your editor! Support us on Patreon at https://patreon.com/revisionwizards The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2409

In this episode, we discuss what to do to prepare for your editor, and what to expect from your editor. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2409

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In this episode, V.E. Griffith and Miss Catherine M.H. welcome guest Sacha Black to discuss the nuances of creating compelling villains in storytelling. Sacha emphasizes the importance of humanizing villains, challenging the notion of them as caricatures of pure evil. According to her, villains, like protagonists, need strong motivations and a connection to their past wounds. Furthermore, their actions should reflect their unique perspective on morality, usually involving a critique of accepted societal norms. The discussion provides valuable insights into the craft of character development, particularly the need to approach villains as nuanced, multifaceted characters with their motivations and vulnerabilities. Books Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Find Sacha Website: https://saschablack.co.uk Patreon: https://patreon.com/sachablack Instagram: @sachablackauthor Podcast The Rebel Author Podcast, available in all podcast players The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2358

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith talk again with J.P. Rindfleisch IX, this time about theme and his concept of Story Hypothesis. They discuss how to create a story hypothesis using Max Nief's nine basic needs. Find J.P. on the internet: https://storyhypothesis.com Movies Toy Story (1995) Star Wars (1977) Books The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins (2008) Harry Potter (series) by J.K. Rowling Mandrake Manor by J.P. Rindfleisch IX NRDS by J.P. Rindfleisch IX and Jeff Elkins The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2400

This week, all the chat about what's going on, and we announce a few month hiatus to get us ready for the new year!

In this episode, hosts Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith talk with Zack Jeffries about his new book "Break Through to 'The End'", a book of prompts that isn't like your traditional writing prompts, designed specifically for neurodivergent writers but useful for anyone who finds traditional prompts difficult! Find Zack online! Book: Break Through to "The End" Tiktok: #zprompt or @jeffriesbooks Website: https://jeffriesbooks.com Other Books The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer's Guide to Character Expression by Becca Puglisi and Angela Ackerman Save the Cat: The Last Book On Screenwriting You'll Ever Need by Blake Snyder Support us on Patreon at https://patreon.com/revisionwizards The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2396

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In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss proofreading - what is it, when to get it, what to expect, and how much it costs! The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2394

This week, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith talk about what's going on in their worlds on a more personal, less formal level!

In this episode, Miss Catherine M.H. and V.E. Griffith discuss the details of line editing, including what it is, how and when to get ready for a line edit, what to expect from your editor. how to best communicate with them, and what it will cost. The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.com V.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.com Miss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.com Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2386

This week, both Miss Catherine and V.E. Griffith have some new announcements!